For its been through thick and thin
and of luck it never knew
^ It's

her deepest desires she told to the wind
she spoke of dissapointment and regrets
^ disappointment

one day she got tired
she left it all behind
lonliness she didn't fear
finally she'd be allright
^ loneliness, all right (or alright, though I favor the first one)

* Sorry I needed to point them out :)

once upon a time,
they left her alone feeling hollow
her heart broken to pieces
she didn't know which to follow
^ I didn't like the ryhme here, it seemed like forced.

one day she got tired
she left it all behind
loneliness she didn't fear
finally she'd be alright
^ I like the meaning behind these lines, though I know you can always pull powerful words than these.

The reason why I am pointing these all out, is because I want to nominate this, only without those misspelled words.

Impressive Dear Yaki!!