by abracadabra
I should certainly add here that some images in this poem (generally that of finding "gifts") were based on a contemporary poem I read long ago. Unfortunately, I have forgotten what it is called. I know the poet was female and possibly Canadian. Arrrgh. |
by Kevin
This made me remember why I first fell in love with you. I wonder how many beers we'd have to drink together before we'd speak about things like this, face to face. |
by The Queen
Most people use alliteration in their poems to draw attention from the readers, you did excellently here, but the vowel sounds, smart title and thought-provoking theme which were all done cautiously in this piece of yours, are more than pleasing! |
You....you painter, you.. |
by silvershoes
Definitely the best poem submitted in the club poetry challenge that never officially ended. You have a humble, arrogant, modest, and wisely simple way about you. Conflicting characteristics that mesh somehow and shine through in your poetry. |