Comments : God in the City

  • 13 years ago

    by abracadabra

    I should certainly add here that some images in this poem (generally that of finding "gifts") were based on a contemporary poem I read long ago. Unfortunately, I have forgotten what it is called. I know the poet was female and possibly Canadian. Arrrgh.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kevin

    This made me remember why I first fell in love with you. I wonder how many beers we'd have to drink together before we'd speak about things like this, face to face.

    Oustanding piece of work, I have nothing to add to it, except to say I get it, feel it and love it.

  • 13 years ago

    by The Queen

    Most people use alliteration in their poems to draw attention from the readers, you did excellently here, but the vowel sounds, smart title and thought-provoking theme which were all done cautiously in this piece of yours, are more than pleasing!

    Great work!

  • 13 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    You....you painter, you..
    wherever
    you are
    there will be giant
    canvasses to traverse..
    I so enjoyed
    this journey..

  • 13 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Definitely the best poem submitted in the club poetry challenge that never officially ended. You have a humble, arrogant, modest, and wisely simple way about you. Conflicting characteristics that mesh somehow and shine through in your poetry.
    You're a winner.