by Cindy Feb 7, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Spirit full of evil, you have no soul |
by Sarah Day
I really enjoy reading all of your poems, but this is one if my favorites. |
Hi Cindy. Yet again what a great poem, you never seem to disappoint. This relates to me a lot with a certain someone. It's been awhile since i have been on this site again. It's nice to see i am not the only one still writing after all these years! |
It's been a long time Cindy! Your writing just keeps getting better and better! Great job! It was strong and beautiful :) |
These kind of people do live with us today, everyone I'm sure has at least one person who they can say goes around lying, just in order to hurt them in the end. It's really sad that they don't have anything better to do. I loved the ending, as it turns the situation around, their true colors show, making you realize who they truly are and that they are only trying to trick you; now you are free of their control, a really great feeling to have as you feel you've won. Awesome Cindy! |
by Boy
Brillient!! my fav stanza |