In my opinion, some people just don't know the way they are 'evil to society'. They have become so used to for being what they are that they just can't feel the difference of good/bad. It's always hard to ignore such people as they appear to be so warm from outside.
Don't fall for the sweet deeds that they do...it will always end being a trap...lol
Very well expressed, great choice of words

all the best and take care

Your word of choice is excellent and they make each line come alive with images.
At times we get so drawn to people by the wrong things which at that time seems something heavenly! Very well expressed!

It is to bad that there are people like this in society but the title and last two words, forever free, sums up how we should feel when we recognize these people for what they are.

This is very sad indeed. From my experience from certain kind of people, i think the best thing i can do is to avoid such a person, but what is good is the fact that there are so many great people out there, you might never seen but it do exist. Very well written, kel.

Wow, I would have thought you were writing about my ex husband til I reached this line....

"Men fall smitten by the heels of your shoes
Blinded by satan's spell, they never will see"

LOL.

Cindy, as always you paint such vivid pictures with your poetry, it doesn't have to be dressed in lace and covered in honey to convey the message you are trying to get across. Awesome Job as always.

A wonderful poem that I really found moving and actually quite true for todays society. So many people could fall into this type of person and it is so unfortunate how many people do get tricked by them. Also in the way of this being satan it is also a sad case. Anyway your poem had some wonderful emotions in it that you poured out and got across throughout the poem. The flow was also good and I found it went from line to line with ease and perfection.

In all, I am impressed with the wonderful message you got across and the only thing I saw that I really don't care too much about but some people may is the lack of punctuation. I don't think it is necessary all the time but that's my opinion. Anyway before I babble on aimlessly, thanks for the terrific read. Great job and keep writing.

Brillient!! my fav stanza

How many lives have been destroyed
What a happy day it was for me
When you slipped showing your horns
Darkness lifted, now I'm forever free
we written:)

These kind of people do live with us today, everyone I'm sure has at least one person who they can say goes around lying, just in order to hurt them in the end. It's really sad that they don't have anything better to do. I loved the ending, as it turns the situation around, their true colors show, making you realize who they truly are and that they are only trying to trick you; now you are free of their control, a really great feeling to have as you feel you've won. Awesome Cindy!

It's been a long time Cindy! Your writing just keeps getting better and better! Great job! It was strong and beautiful :)

Hi Cindy. Yet again what a great poem, you never seem to disappoint. This relates to me a lot with a certain someone. It's been awhile since i have been on this site again. It's nice to see i am not the only one still writing after all these years!

I really enjoy reading all of your poems, but this is one if my favorites.