Moon Baby (Tri-fall)

by Meena Krish   Feb 7, 2011


Sweet little moon baby
at long last
you've arrived, my awaited boon,
playful bouncing baby
your laughs cast
melodies from morning to noon

In your glowing embrace
smiles the night
fond moments of love you create
with tender words and grace,
young white knight
for you my life opens its gate

To my dark eyes a gift
of small light
where golden coos become treasures
you keep this heart adrift
with delights
and your presence none can measure

*Written for club title contest*

The Tri-fall, created by Jan Turner, consists three
6-line stanzas, for a total of 18 lines. The rhyme
scheme is a,b,c,a,b,c and meter for each stanza
is as follows: 6/3/8, 6/3/8. This form requires little
to no punctuation and can be written on any subject matter

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  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    To my dark eyes a gift
    of small light
    where golden coos become treasures

    my fav lines... 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Fantabulouse, lol, but seriously, great write, a 5/5 for sure. keep it up

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    I really like this form and you have done a wonderful job with it. The form seemed correct in every aspect but I'm not sure as I didn't pay it too much attention but you still seemed to give your message off even while incorporating it into a poem and even a form. The imagery is really good and I like how i can visualize a lot of the poem and also the flow went right from line to line.

    In all I really liked the message this poem delivers and I like how you went about writing it. This poem shows your talent and even poetic creativeness. So before I go on forever I just want you to know I think you did a wonderful job with the poem. Great job and keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Your words are full of love, joy and happiness in this write. Makes me want to sing it, rather than read. Good job.

  • 13 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Thank you for posting such beautiful poem in contest.

    Such beautiful canvas was created with the magic of your words. Great choice of words and a lovely read indeed.

    Congrats on being the runner up.

    all the best and take care

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