Meena
Congrats for placing in the Title contest. You always do such a wonderful job on the poetry forms. This one packs so much love in each word.

To my dark eyes a gift
of small light
where golden coos become treasures
you keep this heart adrift
with delights
and your presence none can measure

I really enjoyed the entire poem. yet this stanza really stood out to me. How much love and adoration a babies presence can bring out in a parent. The love just fills you from no where. A true gift from God.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Thank you for posting such beautiful poem in contest.

Such beautiful canvas was created with the magic of your words. Great choice of words and a lovely read indeed.

Congrats on being the runner up.

all the best and take care

Your words are full of love, joy and happiness in this write. Makes me want to sing it, rather than read. Good job.

I really like this form and you have done a wonderful job with it. The form seemed correct in every aspect but I'm not sure as I didn't pay it too much attention but you still seemed to give your message off even while incorporating it into a poem and even a form. The imagery is really good and I like how i can visualize a lot of the poem and also the flow went right from line to line.

In all I really liked the message this poem delivers and I like how you went about writing it. This poem shows your talent and even poetic creativeness. So before I go on forever I just want you to know I think you did a wonderful job with the poem. Great job and keep writing.

Fantabulouse, lol, but seriously, great write, a 5/5 for sure. keep it up

To my dark eyes a gift
of small light
where golden coos become treasures

my fav lines... 5/5