Distant Friend

by Lioness   Feb 7, 2011


Though our bodies were at a distance
We were bound by our connection
Unequivocally present emotions
Of love, lust and perfection

Conversations not short of theme
For we would often challenge our mind
Even when we would converse with passion
Our words were always kind

Transformation of sensations
I started to ache for your affection
To embrace you in my body's curves
To feel your warm complexion

I told you once what was lying beneath
Confiding my love, being brave
You could not reciprocate my feelings
So you slowly began to fade

Your lies spoken beyond belief
Forgiveness was truly mine
But our friendship blindly fell apart
It somehow got lost in time

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  • 13 years ago

    by L

    Great piece, it's sad. It shows how a relationship/friendship can end with time. Though, sometimes we don't know why or how it ended but it sure it's painful. I like the flow of the poem it was smooth and it felt that came from your heart.

  • 13 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is brilliant..great flow, great choice of words..its on my favourite list

  • 13 years ago

    by AJ

    Michael is right (as usual) it is a great flowing poem. The rhymes were flawless, it doesn't look like you forced it at all. I also like that you used words that are not often seen in poetry, such as unequivocally. You word selection is awesome, flow is great, the story behind the poem appears to be excellent as well.

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very beautiful romantic free flow written with great skill

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Another heartfelt poem by you. I am sure many people will relate to this piece as we go through unrequited love at some point

    5/5

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