Another heartfelt poem by you. I am sure many people will relate to this piece as we go through unrequited love at some point |
Very beautiful romantic free flow written with great skill |
by AJ
Michael is right (as usual) it is a great flowing poem. The rhymes were flawless, it doesn't look like you forced it at all. I also like that you used words that are not often seen in poetry, such as unequivocally. You word selection is awesome, flow is great, the story behind the poem appears to be excellent as well. |
by Paul Gondwe
This is brilliant..great flow, great choice of words..its on my favourite list |
by L
Great piece, it's sad. It shows how a relationship/friendship can end with time. Though, sometimes we don't know why or how it ended but it sure it's painful. I like the flow of the poem it was smooth and it felt that came from your heart. |