by ChrisT Feb 7, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I feel my world slipping from my fingers, |
Wow wow wow sooo powerfull |
by Amreen
I liked it..!nice1:) |
I didn't even have to read the rest after the first paragraph :) so good |
by Liliana
Good Job 5/5 |
by Jenni
So true. You expressed the emotions really well and it touched me. I liked the rhymes, well i liked the whole poem. :) Well written. |