by Courageous Dreamer Feb 9, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You linger within darkened waters |
by Cindy
Temps |
by Jad
I really like this poem, am not surprised to see that you wrote this however as I really have grown to see how you write and this poem seemed like one of your doings. I mean that in a good way of course. :p Your word choice was good and you used the words for the contest really great and seemed to give them deeper meaning then they original had. The poems flow was good as well, though I am not a fan of it all being in one stanza as Britt mention but it will suffice. |
Yet this hurt will be endured |