Daydreams

by Chelsey   Feb 9, 2011


The mind completely brimful
Yet unfocused, reluctant to think
Out of it, dazed-
A focal point found
A spot on the wall
Perhaps a stain on the curtain

The retina insensible
Numb to blinking
The chest ascending higher
Your inhales become deeper
Growing more and more unconscious
To what's happening around you

A thousand images flash before you
A scenario, a single moment
Conversations going on
The minds illusions-
Real life existence not required
Your gaze on reality is fuzzy
Only seeing the brains story
Captivated by the moment

Suddenly you're awakened
Only, you weren't asleep
The minds minute escape-
Daydreaming

* my first non rhyming poem! I'm proud of it*

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  • 13 years ago

    by Aure

    Love it, I could recognise my own (very often) zoning out in it.

    I would love to make this comment more constructive, but I can only repeat the words of your previous readers. The flow could use some work, but not that much. When you daydream everything is a bit hazy, so why shouldn't your poem be too.

    I loved this one, better than your next two I might say.

  • 13 years ago

    by kelleyana

    I enjoy my read. You create such a vivid imagery and we could all pictured ourselves having experience this. Very well done for me, kel.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I like non- rhyming poems, they aren't really easy to make, but you nailed it.

    I can relate to the message too, I sometimes feel like a whole hour has passed because my mind took a short vacation and then I see the clock and it was only a flash, lol.

    well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 13 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    I'm proud of you!!! :D

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