You know, i quite enjoyed this poem!.....As I was reading it felt like a bunch of random things, yet in the end it all made sense to me!

I loved the beginning, the descriptions of the bee was awesome!

like the summer dress I wore,
her scribbles tangled
within my hair,
within my thoughts.

^^ This was my favorite part! I saw myself in a dress dwindling a pen in my hair which I often do!

Nice write Mel!

This is a winnig for piece for sure!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If a poem was a glass of champange this would be it...this write is so vulnerable so tender...I'm just in awe specially the part about sketching regrets! No one will ever beat your metaphor skills..ne ne ne..they can only dream about it.. xx Mwa!

Mel, I loved this! First of all the format was quite appealing to my eyes. It urged me to read and everything just flowed so flawlessly. The title might have been simple but the poem was in no way plain. I feel every writer goes through a stage of where they feel like their pen's ink has faded although the thoughts whirl around in their heads. I believe this poem truly captured that essence.

"like the summer dress I wore,
her scribbles tangled
within my hair,
within my thoughts."
^This has to be my favorite stanza. The imagery you created truly added a nice feel to the poem.

"and they,
they sat in"
^I'm sure the repetition here was done intentionally but I still couldn't help stumbling along it when I read through your poem a couple times.

The ending was perfect. Great way to add in the feel of the club into your work where we truly are one another's muses. Nicely done!

Five.