I'm guessing this was written for Nan's contest..I noticed the words. I for one would of hope you won with this write. You took her cliche'd words and made them into a beautiful piece!

Love is the sole reason creatures embrace
Heartbreak and sacrifice for goodness sake
The whole truth is sometimes so hard to face
We wonder in awe of what it will take

^ Incredible opening stanza. SO relatable. I just loved it

I really love this poem.

I love this part

We all adore sunshine, water and air
While we live on this earth for a short while

I felt like it is our right to have sunshine, water and the air we breathe. No one should take that freedom away from us

Well written

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This poem has a very relaxed and a natural sounding tone yet filled with though-provoking facts.

Well done Michael! The ending was stunning!

Michael
This is a wonderful piece. Stirs up lots of thoughts for the readers mind.
Great job!

Ooohhh wow MIKE!!!!!!!!!!!SO sorry this is just outstanding :)..
indeed should have taken a certain grat rank..
incredible rhyming !! great word choice..

you are a very talented person..and you speak with so much credibility in all of your poems.
Mastered my master
5/5

//Civilization was born in Egypt
Even freedom must follow sacred scripts //
though provoking ending...
wonderfully written