Comments : Night of magic

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Oh the 2nd club contest ? amazing job :)!!!!!!
    this is just outstanding...
    a well written poem..with soooooo much love and events...felt so credible like you are remembering and writing down a sweet past memory..

    this was my favorite:

    Years have passed since I thought of you,
    but there's been rare times when magic
    made itself known to me as bright as when that
    door locked behind them and you came to light.

    ^^^
    i love the relation between it and the title..
    i believe you done a great job!!!
    5/5