I like the emotion in this poem. I use to be a cutter myself and very often I felt weak. I have been clean for nine months and let me tell you it has been the hardest nine months in my life. All's you can do is hope that that one cut will be your last, and if it's not then hope at some point it will be. But the poem was very good, Keep writing it might help in more ways then you think. 5/5

Svandyke

Thank you.

My god, this piece is stunning. The emotions and descriptions are dead on. I am one like the girl you describe, and I know it hurts. This piece really hits home for me, and I love it. There is a perfect length, wonderful word choice, a smooth flow, and a great message. I think it really tells about who you are as a person, and the way you see things around you, it also shows how smart you are for being young, oh my I could go on and on about this piece. Though even if I did, I bet you I could never find a defect with it, nor do I wish to. Excellent job. 5/5 keep writing and I'll keep reading cause you definatly have talent.

Thank you so much, I didn't even realize anyone read my stuff. I should be uploading more. I have a bunch written down, just not on here yet. but thank you!