by Kuro Feb 13, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I see you |
I found this one to be pretty refreshing, simple and romantic. |
by Jad
I can't really say this was one of the better love poems I have read but I can say that you did a wonderful job at expressing your feelings for this person whom you love. You seemed to have a good flow with the lines and also the emotions in this piece come pouring out of every stanza. I wasn't a big liker of the repetition you used with those two stanzas but you did say this was a song so it might sound better if I heard it as a song. |