Land of Living Skies [Haiku]

by Elizabeth   Feb 13, 2011


As day turns to night
the northern lights dance, flowing
river in the sky

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  • 13 years ago

    by yogi73

    Haikus are tough...I like this one! good job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    I have to say that I fell in love with your title, even before I read your words, it created a most beautiful image. I've never had the pleasure of witnessing the northern lights, but through your words I wast cast a breathtaking vision. Amazing write!
    Take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Yes they do.....
    very evocative and visually charming..

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This is just absolutely stunning ! An amazing job with a seriously great wording.. I SUCK @ HAIKU..and this just took my breath away that I wished..I am there to watch the view!

    5/5
    no bet