This is really good. I loved:
'And though everything owns a name
One of glory and one of shame
Mine is murdered in ignorance'

I could relate to that most, going through life without a name, nothing really tieing you to this world. Just amazing how you capture the misery. Love it... 5/5

Svandyke

Adel
I have missed reading your poems. I'm so glad you posted this. Very deep and thought provking piece.
Excellent job!
Take care
Cindy