Lu,

I loved the concept behind this poem and the way you linked it to a canvas was interesting.

"Only to regret a poorly displayed
canvas of egestive fiction,
on a background of winter."

These were my favorite lines, the white canvas being winter was an amazing image, although you didn't depict a winter scene using words exactly, I found myself portraying this beautiful little image of winter on canvas as it came alive. This was because you wrote the above so creatively, you pushed my mind to see it.

I adored the use of fingertips a beautiful way to depict uniqueness. I wouldn't have thought of that, such a creative idea.

This is why your writing always grasps my attention, it's creative and holds an amazing concept that I find myself relating to.

-Mel