I loved how the positivity evolved within this piece and the good part was when you ended it optimistically. :) You are good at effective line formation and meter.

Flawless piece :)

I've read this several times now, and each time, I grasp a little more of its meaning.

It is a very deep and mysterious write, where love and death intermingle and consume each other in a dreamy, shadowy world, located somewhere in that fascinating mind of yours. :)

This is magical, Brianna. I remember the first time you showed me, I went like ahh, what did she do with the words?. It is like they dance to a rhythm only you know. Little genius:)

5/5 Ingrid