Any reason why nobody wants to vote or comment? i have pored my heart out i wont just flaunt it.. anyways any criticism one might have i appreciate the advice i am not the best of what i have, just typed my words that were a post , and it is only words i have not yet spoke.

This poem was about being in-love when i shouldn't have been.. and when i stated CAN.. i meant by can i buy and do things for you.. only for you to show me you how much you love me back.. but he didn't.. idk i guess it coulda been better but i still think its one of my top ten favez lol

This is good i can relate but there's a reason for everything and one day you will find the answer :) 5/5