Comments : Fading Stars

  • 13 years ago

    by The Queen

    These sad lines make me appreciate more my loved ones! Jenn it seems like you have a lot of buried emotions within you which are too painful and difficult to deal with :( Sending some cheer your way *hugs*

  • 13 years ago

    by The Princess

    Jenn, this is beautiful. I love how you compared human to stars and made it sound believable, rational even. you took my breathe away for a moment =] The ending was my favorite, especially the last line.

    A thought provoking piece, and it left me with contradicting feelings, almost, a sense of loss, hope, beauty and sadness.