This is just amazing! I love the very huge impact that your ending left over me as a reader; despite how the end of the 1st stanza..has this conxn with what you said in your last!
powerful & Wise!

Resist! Resist, amen, with all your heart.
Every step you take of theirs cripples them
in the end. Without falling and the pain,
how will they learn to get back up again?
^^
my favorite part
5/5