To all the broken promises

by Meme   Feb 17, 2011


All he told me was...

I promise you I will be there
I promise you I will go no where

I promise you I will hold your hand
I promise you; by your side, I will stand

I promise you it will always be ok
I promise you that I will always stay

I promise you I will call tonight
I promise you I will always write

I promise you; you are the only one
I promise you; after you, there is none

But all I had to say is...

I promise you I will no longer cave
To all the broken promises you gave

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© Copyright 2011 by: gIrL
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  • 13 years ago

    by kimara4955

    I absolutely loved this poem, i don't know how many people have felt exactly the same, too many to count, i've been there, it takes a while for those two sentences at the end to come out but when they do, you realise, how come you never saw, and how come you stayed. i think you are an amazing writter,-5/5 and look forward to reading more.
    take care
    xxkimxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Cupids Got A Gun

    This is really good:) I like it alot i have been there and i know the feeling! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Wow... Though humanz tend 2 make promisez on a happy note, but r forced 2 break under d climates of time in circumstance....

    I Promise U... Itz yet another wonderful write 4rm u... Really enjoyd reading it... Keep it up dear fren....;)

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    I promise you I will no longer cave
    To all the broken promises you gave

    my fav lines... its how you describe all the things in a very good manner. i liked the way..

    Its an idea that makes us write and gives us flow of writing. i can see the idea.. of you writing... makes more idea can give you more writing.. frm deep in your heart... 4/5

  • 13 years ago

    by jarrod

    It's sad that poems like this have to exist. I like that it was succinct and that you only said what you needed to say (meaning the last two lines). Very nice poem!