Falling Water(Tanka)

Awesome write friend. Short, simple & yet so realistic. Very refreshing as its so easy to imagine through your words. Loved it.

all the best and take care

You really brought this image to life. Nature is definitely full of so much life. Rain seems to really bring the beauty out. A beautiful write!

Oh man me too.. I am in love with Waerfalls and such images.. this was fantastic.. I agree with Cindy.. I too almost heard the sound of the falling water, and almost caught that ..type..of smell :P lol.. hmm fresh nature..

what a brilliant piece Austin!

Drizzling liquid

^^
fantastic wording!

soaking, filling, nourishing
alights in teardrops
sustaining life with nourishment
kept plentiful in nature.

^^this is absolutely magical and gorgeous..nature only becomes greater through your words..as sadness becomes beautiful :)

5/5

Reminds me of a light drizzling rain, the sights and sounds of that are so refreshing. Good job with the form.

Austin
Great Tanka! I can almost hear the water falling.
Love Cindy