Comments : The Person I'd Stay Away From.

  • 13 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    I really liked this poem! I can totally relate. I think in some way we all become that person.
    'I just can't wait for the day,
    Where I completely become,
    The person I promised I'd stay away from.'
    I really liked this part. It's so deep and raw. It's like you're ready for whatever life throws at you. The world needs more people like that. Amazing piece. I hope to read more by you. 5/5

    Svandyke

  • 13 years ago

    by Caitlyn

    Thanks so much! :)