Love Means War!

Dang this was amazing. i love it so much.

Wow i really could feel the pain in the words written. it was very good. 5/5

Wow!! this was seriously so amazing!! i really related to your poem and you have such a brilliant and unique style of writing!!

"Everything I had I gave, my heart and my trust,
You acted like I didn't exist, you treated me like dust." - this really captured me, my ex boyfriend use to physically and emotionally abuse me so badly and yet i loved him so much but he could never resipricate that love. (after so many years)

"All your excuses are starting to sound the same,
You brought this on yourself, you have no one to blame." - once i heard a saying, i don't know who it was by but it was "excuses are the cruches of the uncommitted" and when i read that part of your poem it reminded me of that.

over all i loved this poem!! excellent job, keep it up :)

It is all very true..keep it up brother:D

Love does mean war, but its up to you to win it or loose it ..
Another amazing poem..