Spring forest

Simple title- but conveys soft imagery.

"When the cold winter meets spring
the little pixes and faires come out and sing."

Check spelling here- pixies and fairies- easy rhyme flowing here.

"they twirl around with their wings,
they sing in the lovely spring rain.
the rain drips down to the petals."

I would suggest not repeating "spring" so much and using some new imagery to describe their wings....we get the picture that they are singing, but what awakens inside of them to do so? The break after the second line wasn't needed, I felt it broke the flow too, the next line just is too weak by itself.

"if you listen in the srping forest
you can almost hear them sing."

Again, a bit too much repetition here, and watch spelling. My suggestion would be to go back and take away/add and overall strengthen this piece, I feel more senses could have been given. But good job, just work on it :)

God bless!