Comments : Death Embrace

  • 13 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    You did not disappoint in this write. It packed emotions and imagery into it. You have always had a knack for knowing what to say and how to say it in your poems and leaving the reader enough without saying too much so they are to relate.

    "So simple to be a victim,
    Lost in all you swore was true,
    It was decided before you and I,
    Heaven would fall."

    ^^ I loved this stanza and the ending is powerful. It somehow reminds me of the movie "The Devils Advocate" when at the end Al Pacino is giving his speech to Keanu Reeves.

    Wonderful Job

    -Kay