Oh wow..as usual amazing poetry..I love your wording...I love your feelings and your style.
however

Chasing evening star,
you cup the fire of February

^^this is a very catchy opening..
an opening that's for me and my taste..
sounds pretty strong

watching sensuality
rise to such heaven.

^^^
this is absolutely creative, and just
magical..i LOVE it..

With eloquent eye
and senseless sight
(senseless doesnt realllyy fit here
for me..)

I glance freely,
at my guardian
from a rose's lip.

^^
the comma should be after guardian..no need
for it after freely. And omg..what a mind do u hold over your shoulders? you have a dangerous imagination lol..be aware .AMAZING

Breathe me dusk
(something is not here ??
or am I hallucinating lol..umm are you
giving a command or wat..i think you need to
review this :)..if no..then sorry)

Closing lines:
were just as amazing as ever in the previous poem..you are really talented..
I voted the other 2 new poems after reading them..and will comment when i wake up..
keep the good work!!

5/5
keep writing; a great contribution to p an q; you are.

You cup the fire of February,
^Oh I loved this! At first I was like why is she associating fire with February haha, then I read on and realize it represents sensuality... honestly you have a nice thought here, I like the metaphor, it's great.

Great ending,. Very thought provoking.