My Treasure.

Wonderful poem and I find that is speaks great truth in the lines that many people could apply. Like Britt said as fast as you wrote and with the strength of the poem, makes this poem that much stronger! I loved the emotion in this poem and you really know how to write what you feel and get a good reaction from those who are reading it. Well, you got a good reaction from me that is. Your poem speaks truth that is always a great thing to do in poetry as it really puts the writer out in the open!

Sorry, but couldn't find one stanza that I really liked above the rest. I found all the stanzas were as strong as the next and your poem held a strong message from beginning to end! :] Great wording and ideas also were essential in this piece! :]

Overall, You really seem to know how to write a wonderful poem that is very descriptive and also emotional at the same time, keeping the readers attention throughout the poem. I am glad to see that you are evolving as always into a better poet and I can't wait to see where you will end up. Great job and keep writing! :]