Um...I don't know what to say about this one, to be honest. I couldn't even say if I liked it or not. It's really weird, but I genuinely can't say. That's never happend before.

I did like that it wasn't some long monologue, and that it was a nice bite-sized poem. I liked the idea and theme of this piece, but I'm not too sure about the way it was executed. Perhaps if the wording was stronger and free-flowing.

Brad

P.S. Please comment and vote HONESTLY on every poem you read.