by Sunshine
Lol I mean by rest as if I shall continue my life or..try get back :P |
I sink in the |
by Jad
Hmmm.... I think I am still jealous and I have two more poems after this one! :P Nana, this poem was really interesting and I love how you use the title within the poem in some spots and I can see you have a interesting word choice throughout the poem, which is never a bad thing. The flow was good and for some reason I found the rhyming in the first stanza distracting. It was probably just me but I have no idea why I didn't like it. :/ I would personally keep it though. :] |