What we did together

by Flynel   Feb 23, 2011


We could have hold on to
Something that was there
A sparkle of everything
But we had made
A lots of mistakes
Used careless words
Without thinking
If it would hurt
There is just to many
Things to forgive

Maybe not to regret
But to damage enough
To never wanna come back
I promise you thats not what
I expect from you to do
Still I have a question ..
Is it to much for me to ask
To never forget all that
There ever was
And what we ever did together?

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  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This is really sad..heartbreaking yet it teaches you that even when a relation ends, there is always somethings left..beautiful memories to live on or recall each now and then.

    a beautiful piece! I love this the most by you..
    emotions and wording was special not just narrating this time..so well done. hope to see more soon..

    suggestions : you need to punctuate both stanzas, and take off the capitalization of each 1st letter from each line..it broke the flow and loses the reader abit.. send me a pm if you want I'll do it :)

    excellent anyway 5/5

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