This is really sad..heartbreaking yet it teaches you that even when a relation ends, there is always somethings left..beautiful memories to live on or recall each now and then.

a beautiful piece! I love this the most by you..
emotions and wording was special not just narrating this time..so well done. hope to see more soon..

suggestions : you need to punctuate both stanzas, and take off the capitalization of each 1st letter from each line..it broke the flow and loses the reader abit.. send me a pm if you want I'll do it :)

excellent anyway 5/5