Marry me ? lol..
this is such an amazing piece!
I love this so much that I just want to go reread over and overafter I finish giving you my opinion.
like all your poems, you mastered this one up..

but if I have to be honest bout everything I disliked the drip drop part and this one :
"leafy palms"

however doesn't matter, you do have a very good imagination and a very creative side, that none of your poems loooks like the other.
Well done!
keep your work coming
5/5