Catch the Wind

I really liked the short lines here because it set up a nice pace when reading. Your choice of vocabulary was exquisite and refreshing to read. It didn't overpower the poem at all and added a nice touch to the overall piece.

"Paint euphoria
in my veins
with palette in
your own hand"
^I LOVE the image this stanza created in my mind! I could feel the euphoria you hope was to be painted. Very nice use of imagery here. Flawless!

I like the timeless essence in your writing. It has a unique style which makes it that much more fun to read. I really enjoyed it :)

The only praise worthy of this poem must be given by borriwing from the Creator you have Painted euphoria
in my veins

'Mindblowing'..thats all i would say..don't want to ruin the taste this poem has left in me.. :)

Paint euphoria
in my veins
with palette in
your own hand

One of the best stanza i have come across lately.

all the best and take care

Very nice work Kay, I like the shortness of the lines and your use of description, it really spoke to me and it was a pleasure to read, great work.

Kay
what a beauty :) You always leave the reader wanting more. You pulled me right into the vision you were seeing with every word.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy