Nana, to simply put this, you tore me into pieces with this poem. I know how much this can hurt and your words stab into my hurt with truth that I end up wanting this poem to go one forever so I can feel my emotions being poured out in someone elses poem. You just don't really how much this affected me and I think you may have given me inspiration to write a poem! :] Your poem flowed smoothly and I love how you held a strong message in the lines.

I couldn't find one stanza out of the two that I liked the most but I will say that they are both very powerful in both message and also truth and lastly emotion!

In all, I think this poem got the most emotion out of me from all your other poems. I have been lied to soo much and I know every little emotion that you wrote in this poem and I was touched deeply. I hope you continue to write like this. Simply beautiful! Great job and keep writing. :]