Comments : The Ghost

  • 13 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Wow! This is truly awesome, not the kind of ghost I thought it was but hey, its great. And you did this, how long? Good, no, very good :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Dontay

    Thnxz.

  • 13 years ago

    by Tsukuyomi

    You need to work on your grammar (Capitalization and Punctuation mainly, some Spelling issues too), but it is an ok poem.