Ohhh wow this seems like poem I would write back in my day..breaking up with someone you're so deeply in love with is so hard. I've been in this situation and have had these same feelings and its terrible. Eventually it does happen...moving on. I never thought it would because I was so broken over it, but it happened and I finally did!

This poem was a great little venting session. A few rhymes seemed a little forced and the syllable count through me off a bit, but it still didn't stop me from relating to your words!
:) Chelsey

Sometimes writing can be such a good release...I think you wrote down really well how you feel inside and I hope it helped:)

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid