Beautiful

Chels, I love the alliteration in the title! It makes for a great topping on your poem. :)

"lay dormant on her pale cheek"
^Great use of words here to create an image, it was really effective.

"His songs as her vicodin"
^Must be some strong songs! haha

This was such a cute poem Chels! I couldn't help but smile throughout it. All girls wish for that one guy that makes every pain disappear with just their touch or their voice. You described this nicely and I really enjoyed reading it.

Well done!

Five.

Very well written, at first I thought the girl's pain was caused by the boy. Your words became pictures in my mind. I love how you can provide just enough detail to make your poem vivid, but not too much...

I truly love it 5/5