My love

This poem is very simple, it's nice though and communicates honest feelings. Try to keep a steady beat when rhyming and use expressive words instead of the regular ones, like love can be an eternal fire burning or warmth in ones heart instead of saying the simple I love you. Still, it is a good poem and you can always improve. Also, try using creative tittles that would catch a persons attention.

I liked this one, but one thing-sorry

it will always be there
rather or not you don't care

that last line you might want to tweak a bit so it's not as... repetitively confusing, it seems to kind of cancle itself out

This one esecially this one hit home with me. this is how i feel about my boyfriend right now.. good job. keep writing!

I like this one alot:)) I think its very sweet and honest! Honest to the point poems are great!!