I really enjoyed this poem. It was really well written. It had great, simple rhymes that were so effective and free-flowing. The subject matter was put across well, too.

There were many parts I particularly enjoyed, but here's some of my favourites;

'Angels walk among us
But I was never blessed
My wings have long turned black
From being so depressed'

It flowed so well, and I also like the power, intensity and imagery in it.

The simple line of 'The edges sharp as glass' was wonderful. I can't quite pin down why I liked it so much, exactly, but it was a strong statement.

'Ive come to far into the darkness
There is no turning back'

This was another particularly well written piece. The actual idea of going so far in the darkness you can never return to light. Felt a little like something Hades, the God of the underworld, might say.

This was a great piece.

Brad

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