Comments : Forever past our tombstone

  • 12 years ago

    by Drawing a Blank

    Whooo! Sultry and enticing - the words flow smoothly. This poem is strong with emotion, such as passion and admiration and lust. I really like this, you're such a good writer! ^_^

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by miracle

    Aww thanks gota love lost loves lol