Lookin for trouble

by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost   Mar 1, 2011


If lookin for trouble
i'll make it double
comin up short like stubble
my words leave your body burried amongst the rubble
know you thought you were on fire
but i had to burst your bubble
only way you could see me
starin through the lense of da hubble
cuz im a shootin star
takin shots up at the bar
all da haters who thought theyd talk shit
know they wouldnt get far
this your last chance so its time for the hail mary
mary please save me cuz dis crackers pretty scary
at these snakes and fakes hearts
like cardio myopathy
your most gorey horror story
is really my biography

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  • 13 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I liked your words and the thing you were writing, and to listen to it spoken, it would probably be great, but to be read, I think it needs work. Reading it, the flow and stucture seems messy.

    I could see what you was going for, believe me. And it was cleverly written, with lines like 'comin up short like stubble'.

    Brad

    P.S. Please comment and vote HONESTLY on every piece you read

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