I can't believe no one's commented yet. You used to be so popular on this site. lol

As I've already told you, I think you really nailed the form. Nicely done!

Nice work with the form. Your four lines brought smiles to me tonight as I read them. I also could see an image of the stammering, stuttering king. Well done.

Lol, shame on you, to make fun of other people's shortcomings, tsk tsk!

Thanks for the laughs:)

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

I've always enjoyed the Clerihew form, and this piece is no exception. Original, and defintiely funny.
Take care