Soul Purge

by that Dude   Mar 2, 2011


Crying dying
Looking for love
Purging my soul
From Heaven above

Waiting forever
To find the one
Who will love me
Show me fun

Crying dying
Continue the way
Of purging my soul
Until you stay

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  • 13 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Short and simple. In some cases, I think a poem can be better with fewer words. I liked the way the first and last stanzas started with the same line. Like a cycle. I think this was a good piece.

    Brad

    P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every poem you read.

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