I really liked the imagery it was like I could picture the whole thing. The flow lost me a little bit when the talking started though. I'm not quit sure I got the full message but it was still very cute and gave me a little laugh. Keep writing you have a way with words and detail. 5/5

Svandyke

Counterfeitism, demands rush. The original, shan't soon crush. A fraudster, makes no haste to bless; Knowing soon, you shall lie in waste. Every true gift, takes some good time. Nothing good, comes speedily; friend.