by anjielblue Mar 3, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I confess my love but you just laugh, |
These situations can make many things feel awkward and make us feel sick, best of luck!! hope all geos well for you!! :-) |
Excellent |
by BlueJay
This poem has some emotion, but is lacking it in certain places. The ending wasn't very strong at all. Your beginning was O.K, but no where close to fantastic or superb, or anything like that. I'm sorry that you weren't meant to be, because it seems as though this guy means a ton to you. There really is no flow to this poem. Though I do congradulate you on your word choice. It was simple and well put. |
by anjielblue
Thanxz emma yah actually he's now in a great hands of other girl now he'll be coming a great dad and a great husband soon...it was really hurt but have to accept that we're not meant to be... :-( |
by anjielblue
Thanxz emma yah actually he's now in a great hands of other girl now he'll be coming a great dad and a great husband already...it was really hurt but have to accept that we're not meant to be... :-( |