by Jojo Rae Mar 4, 2011
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
I live in a world where nothing seems real. |
by Steven Croat
Nice ideas!Great poem:) |
by smashley13
I really like this poem. It flows well and I can relate to what you are saying. |
This was a good piece. There was just one issue I had with it. The line 'I don't want to hurt'. It's out on it's own. It doesn't rhyme with anything. |